Have you been in cold ice at the temperature of negative 1 I know you might say that is cold, Jack frost is a killer he makes people fall on ice well the real story is that he likes ice and he make ice wherever he wants, most people say Jack frost is not real and that includes me.If Jack frost was real there would be lots of trouble I bet you.when I went outside my rabbits water was ice i told my sister that the rabbits water was ice she stepped in to the ice the ice was one layer my sister go so wet,poor sandra.I saw drizing ice on my car, the handle of my door had ice on it my hands were like a piece of ice,soon I was warm because my car was heated,I felt really.When I got out of my car I shivered.
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