Thursday, March 21, 2019
six-sentence
This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our focus was on creating sentences. We learnt that the four critenia of a sentence are our sentence must have one idear. Our sentence must make sence. Our sentence starts with a capital letter. Our sentence leaves one space between each word.
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great work petter
ReplyDeleteHi Peter Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. I like how he rang a bell and the elfs came! Next time I would like you to self check your work to see if it makes sense and if you need to add any punctuation.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to hearing back from you.
Miss Goslin
thanks alot for that comment
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